Eh.

by GoodMorning   Oct 26, 2006


Once upon a time,
I gave you my heart;
Found home in your arms.
But I now I stand here,
Alone;
Out of place.
Where we sit and -act-,
And talk,
Like strangers.
Never saying what's truly
On our minds.
Enveloped by these feelings
Of loneliness,
Of not belonging.
This suffocating place
Isn't our home.

*Ahaha. Yeah. This is pretty much awful. Sorry. I was just tired of never writing.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This is far from awful, dear.
    I actually quite liked it.
    It was sad =(
    But really expressed your emotions which is what poetry does =P
    Well doneeeeeeeeeies.

    =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Bethany

    I like that peom not your very best but grand none the less.....and a cheese curd is like a mastarella stick only smaller:')lol 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by jac

    Well.. not awful, just definately not your best? lol but I know how it goes, I dont write nearly as much as I used to, so every once in a while I just write because I feel like I -have- to, and it's not as good as when I really have something to write about. keep it up though

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