Well.. not awful, just definately not your best? lol but I know how it goes, I dont write nearly as much as I used to, so every once in a while I just write because I feel like I -have- to, and it's not as good as when I really have something to write about. keep it up though

I like that peom not your very best but grand none the less.....and a cheese curd is like a mastarella stick only smaller:')lol 4/5

This is far from awful, dear.
I actually quite liked it.
It was sad =(
But really expressed your emotions which is what poetry does =P
Well doneeeeeeeeeies.

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