Ended With One Song

by xoxShorteexox   Oct 26, 2006


Passionate voice calm her to sleep,
as heart beats running through her chest.
As people too caught up in their masquerade,
to see her she's okay.
Those lies of promises broken,
her little heart stops.
As all the thoughts of cries go unheard,
and her nightmares haunt her little dreamland.
As their masquerade continues,
and her passionate voice calms her.
Her hearts runs as she walks on that stage,
as she begins to sing all their lies away.
She sings in her passionate voice,
of promises never kept.
As their masquerade comes crashing down,
and her true feelings show through.
As she slowly walks down the steps,
with that bright smile.
There's no more tears,
and the pain was all let go.
As their masquerade was ended,
by one song and one girl.
All those lies that had reunited them,
were shattered.
With one song,
and one forgotten girl's song.

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  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I really liked this.. Again, I don't like non-rhymingness, BUT I loved the message.. It was sweet. Yet, sad. Nice. May I make a suggestion as a friend and critic? To get your poems to flow better, make each line around the same syllables (Spelling). If one line is 7 syllables, make the others 6-8. I hope you don't mind me saying that... Just trying to help. If I was too bold, just tell me.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5