Why the hell are you dressing in colors then?? i like it though

There was REALLY great figurative terms in here. I mean it painted such a vivid picture...it just blew my mind. Really, seriouly, that was VERY good! Very sad, but VERY good. Definately keep it up. 5/5
~Jules

This is my favourite of all the poems of yours I have read. You really found the way to portray your emotion through your words.
well done 5/5!