I like the strength you showed in this poem. That you realised what he wanted you for and wouldn't take it. It makes this poem different, and i like it. Yet, at the end you admitted that you will always love him, even though you knew you had to let go. I love this poem. Such truth, and a great use of words, with a good flow too. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

This remindes me of a friend of mine that ive been upset with the past week so yea i like this one and all
stephanie