I like your "apology" at the end of the poem. A great idea! Jpoet*

Awh.. Sweetie, thats so sad hun. See thats the difference between you and me.. If I like a guy, they always know. =P But its not necessarily a good thing, lol. Anyways, back to the poem.. It was good and expressed what you were trying to say well. I think it could be improved though. Try using more unusual or complicated rhymes.. It makes it more interesting and original.. If you have trouble finding rhyming words why dont you check out "rhymezone.com" lol. Its very useful when you are trying to rhyme. =] Keep up the great work hunny! 5/5

Ohhh this was really sad and heartfelt dnt be sorry for loving someone hun u cant help how u feel but i understand where ur coming from. neway u expressed urself really good. keep it up xx