by *Charisma* Oct 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
If time was in the beat of my heart |
by aDORKable x3
Jpoet, very nicely done! you had great flow and rhyme pattern was almost perfect!! thanks for the comment!! =] |
I liked i dont see why people have been voting it so low it was well reflected at the ending suited the beginning. It went on a bit thoughout the middle but generally was a really good poem xxx alex xxx |