This is a good poem with a sad tone, you have done a great job here

Great Poem... Could Use Some Editing On The Spacing.... But Overall- It Had So Much Pure Emotion In It. Greatly Done 5/5

*~*LoveLustTragedy*~*

Well emotions poem you potray here, so heartfelt, though sad but well expressive emotions, breathtaking penned!

Oh wow..
So sad, but a pleasure to read.
The imagery used was fantastic, as was the wording.

WOW.

Excellent. The imagery was outstanding and the passion of the piece was subperb [mspl]. This was a very deep and wonderful write. Loved it.

Jeannie