An Inky Blackness

by DragonGirl   Oct 26, 2006


It surrounds me
making me light
I feel nothing
but the coming cold
I shiver as it takes me away
a place of no return
It laughs at me
watching me freeze
I feel faint
of the coming cold
I feel nothing
but emptness
I grow colder by the mintue
I will soon freeze
It laughs at me again
taking the light away
I feel alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by !JJ!

    I agree with her ^
    The part about how your poems are really good. because they really ARE

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    Your poems are beautiful. Is that your real age? because that is astounding.

    keep writing.

    i hope you don't feel like that all the time.