This poem is amazing; i think everyone remembers this moment of their life when we think about to give up. i love that line this is where my blood lay this where i shall be (i know i probably got it wrong ;) im stealing it for my nickname awesome job!!

I felt ur pain in this poem. it is very emotional. and it's how i feel too. u r a very good writer. and i enjoyed reading ur poem.

Very nice :) i luv it and im sorry bout all that if thats really how u feel :( u seem really great and u derserve someone who cares and will be there srry im not them