Comments : Promises (for a friend of mine)

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A genuine from the heart write. nice job! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful penned tribute to a friend, simply but well expressive emotions!

  • 18 years ago

    by IML

    Hey, thanks for the one comment. I have stopped writing ever since I lost..it..her however you want to put it. Ever since I lost all my talent in a way without her but reading this poem puts my head up. Wonderful poem and I rated it 5/5. You are a very talented and blessed writer. please keep in touch! lol. i would wanna read some more poems of you and from you haha. bye. Thanks again. Bye

    Ian McClannan

  • 18 years ago

    by The Undoing

    This is really good. It's really sad, and I can relate to it, very nice, very heartfelt.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sexy N Sweet

    Codos thats great!!!!
    Keep up the good work!!
    Its always good to stand be a friend no matter what they are going through!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by manic moments

    Awww Kirsty thats so sweet, That guy is lucky to have a friend like you. Good job here

    Love Niquee

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Kristy,
    Overall, the poem was nicely written. The sentiment was well thought out and versed. The last line didn't quite follow the flow of the rest of the poem and I had to reread the last few lines, to get it to sound and flow well, but like I said, nicely done.

    Keep up the good work and thanks for commenting on my poems. Will try to get to some more of yours later.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 18 years ago

    by NAYMLIS

    Well this poem is amazing i love it and i can feel where your coming from atleast from what i read i think i understand... i posted some new poems if you want to check them out

    peace, love dope