by myshiningstar14 Oct 27, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
The face of an angel, |
by Word flow
Gd poem agen. someone we all shud have someone who will help and bring happiness to us |
Your very lucking to have someone like that |
by Mark
Hi, I like it! Though I aint much of a love poem reader, so a little hard to comment, sry... Good rimes, and the structure is nice indeed, though The Angel inside is trapped, and free'd by Dave, but why? Putting up a facade Shining? How's you're inner Angel always kept in silence... Just some answers I needed :) Perhaps I read wrong, but anyways Shining... Great Poem :) |