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by kamal Oct 27, 2006 category : Life, society / inspirational
Very gradually, Your adulthood loomed to a fading Very gradually, My youth bloomed to a grading Very evenly Your face withered to a shadow Very evenly My place weathered to a glow Very calmly Your hold lessened to a release Very calmly My foothold strengthened to an ease Very steadily Your embrace came to a liberation Very steadily My pace came to a determination Very smoothly Your striving arrived to a halt Very smoothly My thriving survived and evolved Very slowly Your breathing reached to an end Very slowly My living enriched to ascend You presented, A scented, And blended Gift of life Very gradually My adulthood seems to loom to fade Very gradually Your childhood seems to groom to a grade Very evenly My face seems to wither to a shadow Very evenly Your place seems to glitter to a glow Very calmly My hold seems to lessen to a release Very calmly Your foothold seems to toughen to an ease Very steadily My embrace seems to reach liberation Very steadily Your pace seems to hitch to determination Very smoothly My striving seems to arrive to a halt Very smoothly Your thriving seems to be alive and resolved Very slowly My breathing seems to reach to an end Very slowly Your living seems to bridge to ascend A present, Similarly fragrant, To you it is in descent The circle of life
by Misstress
I like the rhythm on this poem. very thought provoking as well.. and Im a big fan of the repetitive types of poetry. Ive enjoyed reading this one.