by Tripp Oct 27, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I live in a world of shadows and hurt |
by Bridgette
This poem has so many pure emotions in it. You did an amazing job on this. There were a couple commas that were unnecessary as in the second line of the second stanza and the last two lines don't need commas. But other than that this was an amazingly written poem. I loved the word usage that you had in this. And the flow and rhythm was very good and held up well. Great job on this! 5/5 |