Tears Are Flowing

by x.Athame.x   Oct 27, 2006


"Tears Are Flowing"
Oct. 2006

Tears loosely flow
A hot coursing river
Of anguish and pain
Skin so red, and raw
Streaked by the flood
Ripping the soul out
Heart is torn in two
Body shaking in sobs
Fire of hate in veins
Broken lonely self
Crying into the night
Nails dig in so deep
Drawing crimson up
Crimson tears of blood
Wrists now crying too
In their own solemn pain
Hair in such disarray
Mascara flows now too
Tears, so black as ash
Dripping now from a
Powder white face
Is torn into pieces
Pain is so biting, hard
For now, dead am I
For I will see you not.

**Please, please comment, or at the very least vote. It really doesn't take much time, and means a lot to me. Thanks. :)

(C) Luna

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  • 17 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Good job with this one.. it was the right length and you used really good emotional descriptive words! keep it up
    amanda

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this is really sad but you are a really good writer.

  • 17 years ago

    by Teesh

    A excellent poem 10/10 and thank you 4 commenting mine keep the great work up xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautifully sad penned, though simply but well expressive emotions...

  • 18 years ago

    by sad boy

    I can fel the pane with yoù