Beautifully Disguised

by Lost & Delirious   Oct 27, 2006


She stands beautifully disguised,
Exhaling invisible pain.
Covers herself with shallow warmth,
quiet, proud, and brave.

She looks around her,
Laughter and smiles passing her by,
Holds to her secret tightly
As the existing light starts fading.

The dreaded moment arrives.
Inner cold escapes in the form of tears.
And she silently screams:
"Don't you know I'm hurting?!"

But they'll never listen.
Her pride won't let her speak,
She'll end up unnoticed,
forgotten, unloved, alone.

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  • 17 years ago

    by StarvingForPerfection

    This poem is one of my favorites. I can relate to this. You did a great job writing this. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this. The piece is excellently written, full of emotions. Imagery and choice of words are superb.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -She looks around her,
    Laughter and smiles passing her by,
    Holds to her secret tightly
    As the existing light starts fading.-
    You're very talented poet!

  • 17 years ago

    by So Beautifully Broken

    Very good
    similar to my poem beautifull broken
    <3 keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Excellent job!

    But they'll never listen.
    Her pride won't let her speak,
    She'll end up unnoticed,
    forgotten, unloved, alone.

    This stanza speaks volumes
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie

    Omg cheers very very good!

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