Comments : Dark Dwellers (Ottava Rima)

  • 18 years ago

    by in spite of love

    I seriously love this... its wonderful, keep writing. I rated a fiveeee. ^-^

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Ahh! Beautiful. Wow, you keep blowing me away with your remarkable poetry. I keep pondering what it exactly is you do that keeps the reader so interested?! Your words, your format, your structure, your ideas...everything is so perfect, or perhaps it is simply your talent. I've found the answer. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Really good poem! I can't believe someone would downvote this:S

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    All i had to read was "moon carved trees"
    & i knew it would be pretty.

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    Wow. great poem. I loved the imagery, but it was the rhythm that really held the whole piece together. It worked so well, allowing the beautiful picture you painted to become almost song-like in my mind. fantastic.

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Im speechless facing your words..........nothing less than a 5/5 as you really deserve it, so 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is an outstanding (Ottava Rima) the poetic flow is perfect in each line
    I feel this one as all excellent poetry needs t be read more than once to get the full meaning...great work

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Now that was just beautifully written. The idea behind this is incredible. It was truly awesome. 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wow.that was almost scary. I liked the way you gave just enough description to allow the reader's imagination to run wild.

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Shame I can't rate you more than a five, because you deserve SO much more than that. Ah, what a little talent-ling you are. When I have more time, I'll make sure to read more of your work, as it's so beautifully written.