I seriously love this... its wonderful, keep writing. I rated a fiveeee. ^-^ |
by Sarah Ann
Ahh! Beautiful. Wow, you keep blowing me away with your remarkable poetry. I keep pondering what it exactly is you do that keeps the reader so interested?! Your words, your format, your structure, your ideas...everything is so perfect, or perhaps it is simply your talent. I've found the answer. 5/5 |
Really good poem! I can't believe someone would downvote this:S |
by limp
All i had to read was "moon carved trees" |
Wow. great poem. I loved the imagery, but it was the rhythm that really held the whole piece together. It worked so well, allowing the beautiful picture you painted to become almost song-like in my mind. fantastic. |
by Goran Rahim
Im speechless facing your words..........nothing less than a 5/5 as you really deserve it, so 5/5 |
This is an outstanding (Ottava Rima) the poetic flow is perfect in each line |
Now that was just beautifully written. The idea behind this is incredible. It was truly awesome. 5/5. |
Wow.that was almost scary. I liked the way you gave just enough description to allow the reader's imagination to run wild. |
by SCARECROW
Shame I can't rate you more than a five, because you deserve SO much more than that. Ah, what a little talent-ling you are. When I have more time, I'll make sure to read more of your work, as it's so beautifully written. |