In The Future ( A wedding)

by Letty   Oct 27, 2006


Lost in a world of imagination
Sitting quietly by the lake.
Staring off into the distance
as reality slips away.

A video of the future,
slowly plays within my mind.
loving the beauty that lies ahead
I don't have to press rewind

Seeing you in your all black tuxedo
while walking slowly down the isle,
I give you a signal of assurance,
ignoring the whispers of the crowd.

Finally reaching my destination
taking hold of your strong hands,
giving me your vow of love forever,
and placing on my wedding band.

Reciting my own special words,
giving you a similar ring,
listening to the bishop pray,
as you continue to stare at me

looking deeply into your eyes,
because now is the time,
for you to kiss the happy bride.

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I hope that you all enjoy reading this because I enjoyed using my imagination to write it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. This is a great poem. You discribed the wedding very carefully and it made me feel like I was there! Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I liked it...But, I'll be honest, I didn't love it. It was a very delightful write and fine to read, but it didn't flow for me. Forgive me, I'm just honest.
    It is a very nice topic, though. Good job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 4.5

  • I enjoyed reading this, great flow and rhythm. keep it up, i think u r very talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    That paints QUITE a BEAUTIFUL picture!! :):):)

  • 18 years ago

    by suda

    Hi Honey

    it is a very nice poem and i'm sure it will goning to be a reality.

    love you
    Suda