Family Tree

by Jason   Oct 27, 2006


Rings of time showing centuries long since gone
Standing resolute in memories of the past.
Taking comfort that you were always there

Childhood spent weaving between your branches
Limbs giving shade in those heated days
Fruits you bore to ease an adolescent stomach

Now watching those born from my spouses wifely womb
Giving so freely your fruits and outstretched arms
To them as you did to the child that was me

Winter is here and my children cold
Mighty axe meets living earth
Now we share in your bitter warmth

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    I really liked your title, it really brought out the body of the poem. I also liked your metaphorical meaning to this poem. Also liked how you used it as a pun. Brought out a different meaning to the words 'family tree' nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kim

    I really really really enjoyed this poem and the tree metaphor was brillant. I can see how this could be changed into a sad poem with the falling or burning of the tree so easily.
    A wonderful poem!!!!! Keep writing, keep smiling!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Excellent write.... Damn it Jason, you are leaving me more and more speechless with each new write you post.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Willow

    Thank you for your comment on my latest write. It means a lot!

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