You must have spent alote of time on this poem!
Great work
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5/5!!!!!!!!

(check out any of mine if you want, i like to know what people think)

This is a very well written poem, and i loved the feeling that i got from it. you are a very talented writer, and i cant wait to read some more of your stuff..
Please read and comment on my poems, thanks...Kirsty xx