Awww, this is such a cute, well thought poem, it gets your mind racing with all these silly childish answers (well it did to me anyway.. but hey im one big kid myself lol) i really enjoyed reading your pom, and it have a flawless flow to it which just made it even more enjoyable. great write 5/5.. keep it up..
Please read and comment on my poems, thanks...Kirsty xx

What a sweet poem.

In a way it was so simple compared to other things I have seen you write, and yet it was also very thought-provoking. As for the structure, it was pretty much flawless. I could not find a single thing in this poem that I thought needed correction of any kind.

I miss seeing poems frequently submitted by you, in my opinion you are one of the most talented writers on this site.

Best wishes.xx