Comments : Poor Girl (Revised, LYRICS)

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Pretty good! I liked it. =D Keep up with the writing!

    ~~Spanish

  • 18 years ago

    by Vonnie McHugh

    Lovely words

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    This was beautiful. It has a great message behind it. Keep it up! Never stop writing. Take care!

    -Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This could be a no. one hit! well done. the word use was magic!

    5/5 again and always. david