Shadows

by Pyro (Carys)   Oct 27, 2006


Shadows of my broken past
these images will always last
my friends all rock
but they cannot see
what all of this has done to me
I can't escape
I can't break free
I've hidden deep
my humanity
my emotions are gone
except depression and hate
in hell i will stay
in my lonely state
I'm falling into sorrow
I'm drowning in my tears
I can't escape this darkness
I can't escape my fears
my friends are the best
that I could be given
yet over the edge
I'm being driven

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  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Good job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    OMG! The rythym TOTALLY rocks, and i love the meaning and the emotions... one of the best poems i have read, and a tough form of poetic verse to use, but you have succeded finely. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. this is a very deep and dark poem, you wrote it well, and it had a great flow to it. you are very talented, and i hope to read more of your poems..
    Please read and comment on my poems, thanks...Kirsty xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ShaunaMarie

    This reminds me so much of a few of my poems. You're a good writer so keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Great poem =-)
    very nice work
    5/5

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