Great poem =-)
very nice work
5/5

This reminds me so much of a few of my poems. You're a good writer so keep it up!!

Wow.. this is a very deep and dark poem, you wrote it well, and it had a great flow to it. you are very talented, and i hope to read more of your poems..
Please read and comment on my poems, thanks...Kirsty xx

OMG! The rythym TOTALLY rocks, and i love the meaning and the emotions... one of the best poems i have read, and a tough form of poetic verse to use, but you have succeded finely. Great job!

Good job!!