Hey I have read a couple of your poems and you are really very good. Impresive. I really like your poems, keep up the amazing work! kk buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Very good i like this... your a great writer oh btw thanks for the comment

"Whispers all around here"

~ "her" instead of "here"... If that's what was intended... I think "her" would flow better.

I honestly have to say that you have wowed me with the ending of this poem. The poem was so dark and full of sadness, and in the end, she finds the light... It's very insightful... unique as well.

Good job on this poem. I liked it a great deal. Keep writing, you have great potential! 5/5

~BJ~

Awesome poem

You have done an excellent job on your poem. It really moved me. The emotion was great. You are a very talented young lady.

Hmm, this was good!! intruging, i like it alot bub!!

much love and many kisses,
bex