Omg i love this poem!!! i love it!!!

I love everything about this poem hun! The flow was great, the story, emotion, and the word use were all so good! The last two lines in stanza three are written very well:

How can I say your warm,
when you have ice as your eyes?

I also love the last two lines of the poem. They are my favorite:

But if you can't handle me at my lowest,
you don't deserve me at my best.

An excellent poem sweetie! Keep it up! =] 5/5

Love,
Tammie xo

Wow... this poem is really good. I love the rhyme scheme, it doesn't seem forced at all. Only one line didn't work well: But right now, at my thins point in my life, it might just be me but it doesn't make sense... Other than that great poem!

xxEvilAngelxx

Can i just say you used 'I' 15 times in the one poem i did like it but you perhaps could have made the vocab a bit mroe hard it was good though well done.

xxx alex xxx (1)