Bloody hell. that's a powerful poem. It conveys great sadness and is full of emotion. It seems very heartfelt and that come through. The words that you have used seem flawless. It just carries a very powerful message in it. so well done. I can think of nothing bad to say to that.

Thank you for your comments. It would be my pleasure to check out your poems.

Jemma

Wow.. that is so sad. I am deeply sorry for your loss. You did an amazing job on the poem though. The emotions in the poem could be felt all throughout it. You described everything very well and the flow was good too. 5/5 Keep it up!