Moments I'll never get back

by Jordin   Oct 27, 2006


From the moment I first saw you
And in that moment we kissed
In the moment I felt the touch of your warm hands grasping mine
And the moment where I heard your heart beat as my tired head rest on your chest
Moments in the car driving who knows where, when you looked at me and told me how beautiful I was
And in the moment when we fell asleep together on the soft couch
In all those moments when you’d watch movies with me I knew you’d rather not watch, but you did it for ME
And in the moment you stood in the rain and softly pressed your lips against mine
Moments where you would stop by my house and surprise me early in the morning to take me out to breakfast
Those moments when being with you was just enough
The moment when you told me you LOVED me
And in every moment I could tell everyone you STILL belonged to me

its not that great, but its an off day
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  • 18 years ago

    by missblueyes

    I dont think its that bad! you say its an off day but good poems can come out of it. from my experience the best poems are when you write them when you have an earge to write them, but thats just me!! but what you wrote was good!