Who would ever vote this poem/lyric 1.0? maybe they're just jealous! lol. anyways, i like this lyric. u and the other person who entered my contest are the only ones. so i guess you won! lol. thankz for participating!

Hey great job on this Hun.. Kind of explains how I'm feeling right now lol
Well done 5/5 xx

I would really love to hear someone sing this piece.. it would be quite interesting

I think this is one of my favourites of your's...you sure have a talent for lyrics.
My favourite part was verse two and the ending, I thought both were very hardhitting.
Flow was flawless throughout, and I liked how the chorus was after every verse.