Ooo. This poem is very unique. I love it. Although I don't know exactly what it's about, or if you're even going through this, but I know what the emotion is in it.

There was a pretty good flow to this piece. The structure was original, and I liked that. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Nice poem.
Dark.

Was that supposed to be absorbs?
anyway. I liked it. Take care.
5.5

N-G-C-S.

Its good to know that ur so confusing that ur own twin can't understand it. bahahaha

nice to see u using the site again.. now maybe u can be as successful as me.... KIDDING! *face lauren pulled in dvd from ann and her when she had the sign saying lol* =P

Stacccccccc im lost
is this a poem where u put urself in somone elses shoes and write form their perspective?
or is it written from urs?

btw is gud =P

Very pretty.. It was like reading a leaf found in a dark and lonely forest through which no feet had stepped..

Another exellnt poem you have here i think you are a really good writer and should continue writing :D

xxx alex xxx