True Love?

by StoryOfMyLife   Oct 28, 2006


When you first said you love me,
I wanted that moment to last forever.
I tried to make the moment last longer then it should be,
Since you're only here for the holidays,
We both know that this moment will one day end.
When it was time for you to go back,
You said your not sure if I should follow you.
When I said I'll wait for you forever,
You said you didn't want me to wait for you.
Though you did say "remember me 'til the day you die"

Sometime after you left I decided to follow you,
When we finally met again it was staggering,
My heart was beating so fast,
I couldn't even breathe,
Though you pretended not to know me,
I didn't care...
...because I said I'll love you 'til my very last breath

(please tell what you honestly think about this I plan to use it in my screenplay...lol)

Di27 ©

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  • 17 years ago

    by tHe aPpReNtIcE

    Whooaa!!!this poem realy touched me...good work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Rene

    Holy! Nice poem. I didn't really think it would end that way. Nice way to finish it. Very impacting.

  • 18 years ago

    by ImagineMe&You

    VERY VERY GOOD! =)