Great poem, I really like this. This deserves a big, fat 5!!!

Wow, this was so good! Excellent poem, your works are so deep in meaning, and full of raw emotion. I can never get enough of them, but I am definately running out of perfect things to say...Keep it up Noni! God bless. 5/5

Wow, very nice. You do beautiful work. I especially liked these lines:

All ours lives portrayed as a living race
Running from our own haunting face
Not of this world, nor the world beyond
We pray in tears yet no one ever respond

Wonderful flow and cadence. 5/5

-Luna

Loved it :D 5/5