Very well written and I would expect no les from you |
I like this poem a lot, and I deserves the five I'm about to give it:) |
by Jessica
This was good sweetie.. The flow worked well, the descriptions were full of imagery and the emotion was clear. The downvoters are just jealous that you can write such great poetry! Nicely done 5/5 |
Wow haunting poem . I am so sorry it took me a while to read one of your poems but these new ones are well worth the read. |
by BlueDreams
Another beautiful penned you potray here, though sad but well express emotions, breathtaking! |
by Sarah Ann
A very well written piece once again. Only one grammatical mistake I may have pointed out, but it's already been said...Once again, what can I say, you have talent. I've never seen nothing less than a masterpiece...5/5 |
Luved the poem!!!xxx |
by x.Athame.x
Wow, another amazing piece. 5/5 |
by Danielle
It's not like we haven't been through this so I love that I can relate, and I absolutly love how you wrote it. Beautiful hun! |
by tiffany
I liked how you wrote this!@!! |
Very mystic-sadness, it was a good read :) 5/5 |