Comments : Crumbling Clay

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very well written and I would expect no les from you

  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I like this poem a lot, and I deserves the five I'm about to give it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    This was good sweetie.. The flow worked well, the descriptions were full of imagery and the emotion was clear. The downvoters are just jealous that you can write such great poetry! Nicely done 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Wow haunting poem . I am so sorry it took me a while to read one of your poems but these new ones are well worth the read.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Another beautiful penned you potray here, though sad but well express emotions, breathtaking!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    A very well written piece once again. Only one grammatical mistake I may have pointed out, but it's already been said...Once again, what can I say, you have talent. I've never seen nothing less than a masterpiece...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    Luved the poem!!!xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Wow, another amazing piece. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    It's not like we haven't been through this so I love that I can relate, and I absolutly love how you wrote it. Beautiful hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by tiffany

    I liked how you wrote this!@!!

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Very mystic-sadness, it was a good read :) 5/5