Waste Your Time

by PygmyPuff   Oct 28, 2006


I can't forgive again
Not even if you listened
I just want to remember that night
when you slept without doubt.

I'm leaving now to turn back to my solitude
And let the dust to cover our past.
'Cause I waste your time,
There are more excuses each day
So I must leave now,

It's so late,
I understand,
the world has already revolved around the avoidance
But you know I've been patient until this day
It is hard to acknowledge all my regrets
I waste your time,
and I'm sorry

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  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    What a joy to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I like the whole concept of this poem.
    And the flow is beautiful, But it's lacking emotion. In this poem you're telling us what you have done, what you won't do, and what you can't do. But you are not telling us how you feel.
    I think that it's a lovely poem, it just need some emotion and it would be so much better. Other then that I see no other error's. And also I must say that I think that You did a splendid job with the free verse. I find it to be a tedious task writing free verse poems, but you make it seem so easy. Excellent job. Just add some emotion and you will have a masterpiece on your hands, 5/5

    Best wishes
    Letty

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