I like the whole concept of this poem.
And the flow is beautiful, But it's lacking emotion. In this poem you're telling us what you have done, what you won't do, and what you can't do. But you are not telling us how you feel.
I think that it's a lovely poem, it just need some emotion and it would be so much better. Other then that I see no other error's. And also I must say that I think that You did a splendid job with the free verse. I find it to be a tedious task writing free verse poems, but you make it seem so easy. Excellent job. Just add some emotion and you will have a masterpiece on your hands, 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

What a joy to read.