Sacred Place

by LadyPearl   Oct 28, 2006


Orchids drenched in silver mist
Sprinkled upon the forgotten land
A sacred place; thought nought to exist
Unveil in my dreams in a single strand

Man's first touch was borne right here
Serving its creator by playing dumb
Preserving nature year after year
Never wondering where he was from

Trees tinted in gold dripping mirth
Ponds thriving with sapphire hues
Tranquility poured upon the Earth
A playground to the great god's muse

Evil was chained and kept far away
Till the voice of a woman opened the gate
Ancient pink roses wither and decay
As history crumbles what once was great

Small saplings break through and await
Falling walls as a sign of untamed fate

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wonderful. Your word choice paints such a beautifully rich and exotic picture of Eden it is easy to imagine such a paradise. The ending was so subtly understated as to reinforce the often subtle yet insidious nature of evil
    Brilliant. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, i liked this poem, you are great ....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Fantastic, love your style 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bryan

    Very complicated but its a great poem, 5/5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Wonderful poem! The first verse is my fave. Good write! 5/5