by LadyPearl Oct 28, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Orchids drenched in silver mist |
Wonderful. Your word choice paints such a beautifully rich and exotic picture of Eden it is easy to imagine such a paradise. The ending was so subtly understated as to reinforce the often subtle yet insidious nature of evil |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, i liked this poem, you are great ....5/5 |
Fantastic, love your style 5/5 |
by Bryan
Very complicated but its a great poem, 5/5!!! |
by Elynnka
Wonderful poem! The first verse is my fave. Good write! 5/5 |