Noni, what a poem you try to potray here, simply penned, and leaving well message between stanza to stanza, yet the last one, something beautiful!

Small saplings break through and await
Falling walls as a sign of untamed fate

Wonderful poem! The first verse is my fave. Good write! 5/5

Very complicated but its a great poem, 5/5!!!

Fantastic, love your style 5/5

Wow, i liked this poem, you are great ....5/5

Wonderful. Your word choice paints such a beautifully rich and exotic picture of Eden it is easy to imagine such a paradise. The ending was so subtly understated as to reinforce the often subtle yet insidious nature of evil
Brilliant. 5/5