I really like this. I think it's very deep, and has a lot of meaning. I can relate to it in my own way, and i think other people could too. It flows well and surveys plenty of emotion. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5

Tammie

This poem could be about me lol.. Very deep and brilliantly written.. well done 5/5 xx

Wow. Thats a sad poem but excellent, it brought tears to my eyes if its true...5/5

Interesting write, I like the word ussage, but it didn't seem to pull me in as much as your other poems have. This line stood out to me the most "Casually killing herself slowly." I liked your choice of word in casually.... No one would think of that word normaly to describe one's killing of themself. But you made a topic which to most is written so dramaticaly to seem like an everyday occurance. I Liked it 5/5