Life without you(amr)

by noha   Oct 28, 2006


Life is so hard without you,
may its one day,
may i feel that I'm alone when you gone away,
may i feel sad that my eyes can't see you,
may i feel cold when your arms not on me.
you can see now what happened in one day !!
can i tell you what i feel when i see you gone in your way,
i know that you will back to me again,
but its hard for me,
you take a part of me with you,
something is missing,
is it my breath?
is it my heart?
is it my mind?
or is it me???
anywhere you go my soul follow you.
you know its too hard as i miss you when i look at your eyes ,
i miss you when i hold your hand,
i miss you when you laugh,
i wish if you can stay with me forever.
but life goes in this way,
and you walk in your way,
one thing i want to ask you ,
just hold me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I know how you feel and it hurts alot sometimes...I love how you put your feelings into this poem..Good Job 5*5

  • 16 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Ok i think this goes back to re-reading everything and asking yourself ok how can i make this better. Can i switch some words around that keeps the same meaning but turns the sentence into a simile or something. Like also just the spelling and seeing if you missed any words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    This is a good poem, really heartflet good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, with alot meaning in it, just my opinion you should do a spelling check. Beiside all it a nice poem....NP