Good poem, with alot meaning in it, just my opinion you should do a spelling check. Beiside all it a nice poem....NP

This is a good poem, really heartflet good work

Ok i think this goes back to re-reading everything and asking yourself ok how can i make this better. Can i switch some words around that keeps the same meaning but turns the sentence into a simile or something. Like also just the spelling and seeing if you missed any words.

I know how you feel and it hurts alot sometimes...I love how you put your feelings into this poem..Good Job 5*5