Very touching with pure feelings... nice nice

Very well writen i really liked it... great job

Wow.. amazing.. and yet extremely sad ...

anywayz.. i really loved it ! great poem hun !

HOLD ON BE STRONG!

Wow - gr8 poem - i can really relate to it (i know exatly) what its like to feel like dat! - 5/5 frm me! - p.s. i added you on msn i hope dats ok my addy is sarah1596@hotmail.co.uk

Sounds like me

This is really sweet. I love the rhyming you used. It really shows you like this boy. Its cute!
5/5