by JodieWatts Mar 18, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I catch the glint of light from the steel, |
I loved the poem. Your great with words. Keep it up and never stop writing. |
by Tina
That was so good Jodie!!!! I wish i had talent like you!!! I love your poems to much!!!! Keep it up and I'll keep reading and writing! |
by JodieWatts
thank u soooo much chris !!!! |
loved the poem, the final thoughts of someone committing suicide, really has a sorry feel to it, K |
by karima
hi this was a brill poem! it really has feeling keep it up love karima |