Loooooooove love love it geobar!
you are a very very very talented lady, never stop believing that.
xxx

Anyone would be so amazingly lucky to have you, Geo. You are intoxicating, and I adore you.

BEAUTIFUL write. You're so damn amazing.

♥

Car

HELLO FACE
i am tash on georgi
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and i lahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaave this poem
its not not not bad
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well someone's talented u crazy mofo...UR A LESBIAN =] hahaha love u long time wockey!!!!xxxxxxx

Hey,
I really enjoyed this poem. It made me think. Instantly the first line of the poem, "Have you ever seen the sky and wondered where it starts?" make you acctually wonder, where does it start? Where does the entire universe start? It brings into question these things that we do not know. Things that scientist do not know. Some thing no one knows. I guess it beyound human intelligence, Lol! Anyways the poem as a whole had a great flow, and the rhyme's worked and didnt seem forced. I liked how you satarted all the stanza's excluding the introduction with "I can be the...", this really made the flow good. A very intresting poem. I really liekd it. To improve it i suggest you use a more variety of punctuation. Otehr then that a great read. keep it up! xx

I loved it.
The flow was flawless and the rhyming didn't seem forced.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

I could be the star you look at late at night,
If you love me for the mess that I can be,
I can walk away, out of terror, pain, or spite,
But I'll be more than what your eyes will choose to see.

Wow I love these lines. Brimming with meaning and a superb flow. Your descriptions and metaphores are outstanding. U deserve 100/100

Butiful qriten my favoret part was"I can be the darkness, one colour, one emotion"

This was really good you are talented. :)