Her

by HottChic   Oct 28, 2006


She believed a guy,
Who made his issues, hers.
She also took on his hate,
Bringing her family back to her fate.
Leaving her friends behind,
Just to have a good time,
But hurting them before time.
He became her favorite mate,
Because of her hate.
She isn't the first,
And she won't be the last,
But just maybe,
She won't be forever.
I will always feel this burning fear,
Of her never being near.
Never being able to hear her voice,
When I need help with a choice;
Never hear her laugh,
When Iâ??m feeling down.
I hope that this wonâ??t be forever,
But this is forever.
I will always lover her,
No matter if she hates me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "She isn't the first,
    And she won't be the last"

    That is a very true statement!
    And you did a great job on this poem and putting your emotions into words
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Tinkerbelle

    Hey sis.i know how you feel.i still miss her all the time.u know u can always talk to me and we have ash to talk to also.great job on writing this poem.you always write good ones.

  • 18 years ago

    by marie

    This one hit home because I'm going
    thru this with one of my closest friends
    right now. What a terrible time it has been.
    I wish I had the talent like
    you and so many others on this site to put my thoughts and feelings into
    words.
    Nicely done.

  • 18 years ago

    by HottChic

    Hey everybody. Please comment on my poem and tell me what you think of it.
    lanna

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