by Letty
I loved this poem. I thought that it sent out a positive and useful message. I also loved that the rhyming was perfect, it wasn't a cliche', The structure was good and the metaphor's were wonderful. You are very talented Katherine and I thank you for sharing your talent with me. I found a few error's that I think that you would like to correct. The first error that I found was in this line: |
Awesome work. My favorite of yours. |