Like the Stars

by *Charisma*   Oct 29, 2006


I can't stop thinking about you
Like your with me all the time
First thought I have in the morning
Last thought I have at night

Everything reminds me of you
It all ties in somehow
Doesn't matter if it relates
A place with me it's found

I can live an eternity
Off a moment with you
It stays with me for forever
Like the stars stay with the moon

And if I were the darkened sky
Then you would be those stars
You shine for me and give such light
Upon a heart once dark

You'll never know all you have done
How you have lit my world
Because I'm still anonymous
Just your friend, just a girl

(ok..normally I can't stand ppl asking for comments, but I understand why they do..lol so please comment!)

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  • 18 years ago

    by in spite of love

    Ooooh, you get a five from me, this was pretttyyyy!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    I rly lyk dis poem, I like good love poems and this is definitely one of them, heartfelt, cute and well written. My fave stanza has to be the 4th cos its a beautiful image.
    Beth xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by mellmer

    My gawd, this is probably my second favorite poem. You are excellent. This is just truly amazing. Words cannot express my love for this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    It was a good poem, even though it didn't rhyme, which I really don't like, usually. The two lines that stuck out for me which I loved were;

    'And if I were the darkened sky
    Then you would be those stars'

    Brad

    P.S. Thanks for your honest comments.

    P.P.S. I don't think that 'God gave me a gift, stronger than love' was that good either. In fact, I pretty much completly agree with your comment.

    P.P.P.S. Sorry for not commenting as much recently.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Dear, such a romantic penned you potray here, so heartfelt emotions, yet breathtaking!

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