Admit It

by Stacey   Oct 29, 2006


Red fades to brown,
though to hear not a sound?
But they don't admit.

Mutation and disease,
Its your water, do as you please.
But they don't admit.

Depletion and demise,
The plans that you devise,
And you still won't admit?

The damage is done,
the battle's been won,
Earth is beyond repairable.
And still no-one admits its their fault.

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I get asked a lot what my poems mean, so from now on I'm explaining them.

This one's about humans ruining the Earth and no-one taking the blame to put it simply.

Hope you liked it :)
xx
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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I understood exactly what it meant hun :D so yea i think it snet a very positive message that may manipulate your reader :D

    xxx alex xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Mark Harris

    Your deepness is inspiring. Nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by A Fallen Angel

    It was a great poem written with the right intent. i understand now what you mean about people not understanding what you mean by your poetry... i liked the explanation... it made everything finally fall into place... the last paragraph/stanza... whatever u may call it was the best part in my opinion. very good wrting skills.

  • 18 years ago

    by Topshop princess

    Wow you have a really good point there. great poem, it would have been better if it were longer 5/5 x

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Hehe.
    I understood what this poem was about before you explained it :p

    I liked it.

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