Wow! I lub this poem sooo much! in fact right now im in lub wit a guy names vincent but hia real name is vicente its the same thing,but only in spanish.....hopefully he feels the way he does like the poem describes!!!!! Well i rated it a 5 hopefully you can check out mine!

Hey this is really awesome. i like the repetitive style alot and i try to make it work with my own poems. nicely done.