Comments : Simply life.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lisa

    This is THE BEST poem i have ever read in my life. awesome job! seriously, this poem is amazing.

    i love it.

    keep it up.

    --Lisa--

  • 18 years ago

    by kevin

    Hey this poem is really good, do u mind if i give it to my girlfriend...im not trying to win ne thing but her heart i hope u dont mind

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Drake

    I am so with you! I have a guy just like that! That time heals is a bunch of BS! You can't help your one true love! I only have one of my various poems on my profile, but that might explain how you feel. I know that you obviously care alot about the woman you speak of, and I hope for you that one day she will be yours.

    Sincerly,
    Sarah

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    I love the way you write...it's so beautiful, and it flows sooo perfectly! I am in awe of your work, and sit on the edge of my chair, waiting for each new addition to the collection of your poems on this site. Keep up the great writing!

    ~rikki~

    p.s. comment/vote on mine too, if you please.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very beautiful love poem. the rhyming and flow work very well. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully written!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I know this is the one you entered in the contest but I have to comment on this one because it was just so good. And I loved the note you added at the end. It was really full of emotion so thank you for entering it and congrats on placing. Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by FireCracker

    OMFG! AWESOME JOB HERE...
    It was a really good read. keep it up!! You have a true talent

  • 17 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    I have to cry
    :(
    if my tears were a ocean the world would be flooded!!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr M

    A bit long but very good

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Bert
    This was a amazing piece :) The love you feel pours from your heart. Beautiful.

    You need not fear the future
    For I will be with you
    I cannot help the way I feel
    But the way I feel is true...

    The honesty in your words speaks loudly of the kind and caring heart that you have.
    Excellent job!
    Take care your friend Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    Amazing! I'm so jealous of your extrodinary talent. I only wish that my poetry was as powerful and as inspiring as yours. I have nothing else to say besides ... well done. 5/5.
    P.s there was nothing simple about that poem .... not one word ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    I am thinking how much sweet you are. I am thinking why I did not read it before however it is very very nice.
    50/5