Oh wow. I love this poem. It just...spoke to me, ya know? I don't know how to fully explain it very well, but it's beautiful. The flow was excellent, but could use some work in places (as most poems do). But if you change the flow, DO NOT CHANGE THE EMOTION! >.< I just found that the emotion in this was straight from the heart, and was well thought up with words. Well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I can so relate to this poem. i wish i had talent like u. this poem brings back so many memories i have tried so hard to forget. i really like ur writting. keep it up. love willow xxoo

Wow, That's very well written good job!